food paper

When I started to write this paper I actually had no idea what I was going to write because instead of being a good student I was goofing off and laughing most of the time. I think I could have done alot better on this paper , that is what my partner thought too. I didnt have enough details or interesting facts so instead of someone looking at it and saying " whoa ! this looks cool! I really wanna read it " I think something that they would say would be  along the lines of " what the hell is this shit ? " All I really wrote about was the diiferent kinds of chips and why I did and did not like them and I described the golden and grainy texture that the chips had.
I plan to revise pretty much everything on this paper because I did not have a great beginning and the piece itself was really sad and boring when I went back and read it. I think when I revise it I will give a more interesting introduction or thesis and try to hook in the reader and I will give more deatils. Usually I have too many details and not enough of everything else. I will go into who invented them and what time they were invented and all of those interesting facts and maybe some descriptive details and maybe create some really cool story of someone eating chips or something like that.

Lays Potato Chips

                  I think that Potato chips are addictive because after a while do not taste that great but you can’t seem to stop eating them. A Potato chip is a thin sliced potato that is crispy and salty and fried, and it is a golden yellow. Potato chips have a greasy, crispy, and grainy feeling.  Potato chips are a party favorite and can be found at almost every party that is being held. We tried four different types of Lays Potato Chips; Baked, Classic, Natural Sea Salt, and Light.

The first chip I tried was Classic. Id has to say that Classic is my favorite chip out of all the four. I love them because they are salty, crispy, and crunchy just like any other Potato Chip, But I think I like them because of the design of the bag and the brand. The second brand I tried was Baked. I think these would be my second favorite because they aren’t as salty but yet they still have a good taste. The two things that I dislike about them are that they look and smell like cardboard. The third chip I tried were the Light. I also loved these because they were just as delicious as the Classic Potato chips but they are a healthier version because they are ½ the calories and they are fat free. The last chip I tried was my least favorite of all of them. I thought this chip was absolutely disgusting because not only were they Natural but they had Sea Salt on them and I do not know about you but I hate sea salt, I can taste the difference between regular salt and sea salt. Also I thought they were too thick. I felt like I was consuming big thick pieces of cardboard into my mouth! Altogether I would have to say that I love the Classic Potato chips the best.